Wednesday, June 22, 2005

Don’t bother to be poetical, poetry is the evidence of life

I am no poet, yet I was able to string these words. It’s titled Feel Me.

I

I look at you and see
The fire of emotions raging inside
All the hurt and agony
Then I, too, feel the pain.

II

I have tried and failed
Keeping all the things hidden
I see you study my face
Searching for something which was my shame.

III

This is your own battle to conquer
I know there’s nothing more
For me to say
To make them all go away.

IV

You are at a lost for words
Not knowing how to assure
But this I say to you
Anything, just tell me anything.

I hope you could understand it, as it was an emotional moment. For a tagalize version see here.

There is poetry as soon as we realize that we possess nothing. – John Cage

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

Ayus! Madamdamin 'tong poem mo ahh....

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Sana makita mo yung mga hipon, he he, di ko kasi masyadong maalala yun, kasama syang nabura nung mga tula ko about SARS time.....

Edwin...

Yen said...

it was nothing compared to what you have written...

salamat kabayan sa pagdalaw... sige hahanapin ko si hipon, isda at manok... pagnakita ko, i-popost ko excerpt, tapos i-li-link na kita...

Anonymous said...

ha ha, gusto ko yan'g naisip mo...

edwin

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